I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Monday, December 10, 2018
this is my animation and this did not win the challenge to win lolley pops but i don't mind that any more because it was ages ago it teech's you how to wash your hands
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Hi Amanda its Mitchell here I like how you added speech bubbles when the people were talking.
ReplyDeleteI like how you added a description under Ur work.
Next time can you add more colour.
Can u add more photos in your next slide?
Hey Amanda I like your blog post and great slide show and I like how you made the slide show next time can you make more colour.
ReplyDeleteHey Amanda,
ReplyDeleteIt's Mattisin
I liked your animation about washing your hands it was very funny.
With the hand washing bit you could of put that you had to wash your hands for 20sec and dry your hands for 20sec. Next time you should add colour.
With the writing you could make the speech bubble bigger so we could see the words more.